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Breaking the Fast 2

Transcript

Luchette holds her phone to her head and looks angry, tears showing in her eyes, as she says, "You think I'm some wounded animal with no place left to go, is that it?!" The voice on her phone responds, "Of course not, Lu. I've been worried about you. You know I love y--" Luchette interrupts, tears streaming down her face as she yells at her phone, "Don't say it! You never loved anyone but yourself!!" After a pause, Luchette looks surprised and angry as the voice says, "I thought good Mormon girls were supposed to be forgiving." Luchette growls in anger as she taps the screen to hang up. A second later, she looks down as her phone buzzes again. We see her hooves holding her phone as she sees the text she just received, which says, "aren't good mormon girls also supposed to confess their sins?" Her hooves shake and she sobs as she reads.

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Lark says…

Lark

Block that number… and hope it's not a burner phone.

Behind the Scenes

Notwithstanding the heavy nature of the topic of this page, I really enjoyed the opportunity to play with the text and word balloons. In prose, you can communicate that one character is interrupting another. However, comics give you an extra visual tool. Luchette’s word balloon cuts into her ex’s, visually obscuring whatever he was trying to say. Using different fonts is also useful for communicating different feelings and intensities. I even used a slightly different font for Lu’s ex. Not enough to be distracting, but enough to make it clear that something’s not quite right when she first answers her phone on the previous page. Whoever’s on the other end isn’t a part of Lu’s circle; the slight difference in font helps to communicate that, which is important in this case since we can’t see his face and need to know as quickly as possible that whoever it is isn’t who she thought it was.

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Published:  Aug 10, 2021